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Re:How to fall for a younger girl (Ongoing) 1 Year, 5 Months ago
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It's really well written.
I wonder where you're taking us with it. The character's motives are still so misterious.
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Last Edit: 2019/12/15 03:32 By shlalom_masters.
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Re:How to fall for a younger girl (Ongoing) 1 Year, 5 Months ago
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Damn, that was really well written. The narration is great, and the dialogs feel very lifely, both in the way the characters speak and the de_script_ion going along. The bathing scene was very cute, and the changing room one felt quite real, plus we even got an extended regression scene this time. Go on, Its a great read! :]
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Last Edit: 2019/08/28 20:33 By vended.
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Re:How to fall for a younger girl (Ongoing) 1 Year, 4 Months ago
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Babyhood, here he come! ^^ Will be way harder to get himself out of this situation now.
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