Doing wonders

A little male AR tale which strangely popped in my mind in the midst of last summer. I certainly was out of seasons here, but this does make my first ever completed story. ^^'

Many thanks to all those who gave me early reviews on it, especially to The-Jokers-Valkyrie, aka Octavian, who's long been a great help for me to overcome my everlasting writter blockage.

As it's currently impossible tu submit story on the ARchive, here's a _link_ to the story on DeviantArt :
https://www.deviantart.com/areat/art/Doing-wonders-778656005

Feel free to leave a comment here or there to let me what you thought of it.

I wish you all a merry Christmas, and a happy new year.

I've just read it!

Great little story and fitting to this time of the year!

I agree with the other commentator. Your usage of the different perspectives is great!

Thanks! I don't know why it popped in my mind right in the middle of summer, but it does fit right in Christmas times. XD

I'm glad you liked the different point of views. As someone pointed out to me way earlier on, it kind of spoil what will happen, but I didn't knew how to work around that without a complete rewrite. ^^'

Some stories only work this way!

I mean there is a different appeal in every story. Some work because of the tension about what will happen, some because of the way it happens, some because the story arc fits.

True words.

Any criticism or things to improve next time, by the way? :]

There was nothing to criticize, though I admit once again: English isn't my first language.

The tone, language and size fitted perfectly, even more so for this season.

I hope to read more from you in the future.