And I do hope it's one of the girls.

Another fantastic installment!

Thanks. As for the blushing effect, I've used it a few times before, in The Clothes Make the Woman and Keeping your Guard Up. It's a photoshop thing.

The Vimeo version will be up later today.

vended wrote:
Yeah, the blushing was great. Her reactions overall were very well done.

I really wonder how you will do portraying her now, as she's supposed to act younger, or actually, act her age, in the next chapter, if I've remember it well.

By the way, I noticed you clearly stated her being thirteen, while from having read it when you did chapter one I had noticed her age actually wasn't stated. I thought of her as being fourteen. ^^

Can't wait to see some further regressions, too.

I think she's 13. I always had the impression that she was older than Sally. Remember, the potion takes off 10 years. Bobby is 14. Louder writes in Chapter 1:


"Bobby even wondered to himself if she wasn't maybe a year younger than HIM!"

So I figured that makes her 13. As for Sally, Louder writes in chapter 2:


"She looked to be about 12 or 13. Possibly even younger than Gretchen. Her figure was nearly flat."

So I figured she's 12, and started at 22. As for Mom, that part is a little dicey but I didn't notice it until after I set the story down. She starts at 39, and is now 19. That means she was pregnant with Sally at 17. Guess she was a child bride.

You're right, I didn't even thought of the mother age. I guess it mean it's not too much of a stretch in the plot.
I forgot Bobby was only fourteen. I thought he was fifteen and the narration saying Gretchen was slightly younger would have made her fourteen, but now as you said the sister's ages do fit the narrative.


Got any schedule for part three, by the way?

areg5 wrote:
As for Mom, that part is a little dicey but I didn't notice it until after I set the story down. She starts at 39, and is now 19. That means she was pregnant with Sally at 17. Guess she was a child bride.

Speaking of the mom, what was your rational behind her appearance? I don't mean this to be a criticism but she is very plain compared to your usual MILFish moms. Her face is kinda babyish to me so I figured you kind of modeled her for her second infancy from the onset.