vended wrote:
areg5 wrote:
Submitted for your approval:


Well, you do have mine.

Apart for some little inconstencies -Sally looked older, with a bigger chest, even before she actually took the antidote; and the father's beer belly somehow seem to changes sizes sometimes - it was a perfect 3D comic in itself and as an adaptation of Louder's work.

I find it quite neat how you make it possible to compare the characters before and after (and even during) the regression by having them in similar poses.

The dad is a bastard. Let's see some karma justice! I also can't wait to see the further changes. You did very well on the mental regression on these two chapters, and I wonder how it will be with the next chapters on Gretchen and Jenny.

Keep the awesome work!

Glad you like it. As for Sally, she was wearing her adult bikini and the cups were sagging. I guess it's not obvious on the front view. She wanted to grow into it. Notice that Gretchen was wearing a kids suit. She was never going back. The dad's beer belly is just apparent on the side view. It didn't change.

Yes, as per the original story, karma is bound to happen.

You handled Sally's regression really well. Too bad she grows back up so quickly.

I have to say I like the blushing effect on Gretchen, I don't believe you've done that before.

Yeah, the blushing was great. Her reactions overall were very well done.

I really wonder how you will do portraying her now, as she's supposed to act younger, or actually, act her age, in the next chapter, if I've remember it well.

By the way, I noticed you clearly stated her being thirteen, while from having read it when you did chapter one I had noticed her age actually wasn't stated. I thought of her as being fourteen. ^^

Can't wait to see some further regressions, too.

This is great! I hope someone ends up in diapers and has an embaressing stinky diaper change!

This is great! I hope someone ends up in diapers and has an embaressing stinky diaper change!