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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 4  
Excellent work once again!
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: -2  
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Excellent work once again!

Thank you! I aim to please. It's a classic story. I want to do it justice.
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: -2  
Presenting Poolside Chapter Four:

http://areg5.deviantart.com/art/Poolside-Chapter-Four-530994656

Vimeo: https://vimeo.com/126827470

One more chapter to go! Enjoy!
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 7  
Wow, this chapter was sexy as hell!

And every one of your added or slightly changed scenes to the original story were well done. Like the barbie : such a nice addition! A great read!
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: -2  
vended wrote:
Wow, this chapter was sexy as hell!

And every one of your added or slightly changed scenes to the original story were well done. Like the barbie : such a nice addition! A great read!


Sexy? Really? Thank you! Yes, I made some slight changes. I changed the regressions of Jim and Jack, and took out the part about sunlight activating the oil mainly because I didn't read ahead and I already had Samantha and Jenny regress inside. I've briefly used the child talking to Barbie before, in the final chapter of House of Dreams. Little girls always talk to their Barbies. I figure in their minds maybe they talk back. Glad you liked it! I'm sort of sad that there is only one more chapter to go. I'll try to do it right.
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 6 Months ago Karma: 7  
Yeah, sad it has to end. Well, you already expanded it very nicely. Like Gretchen and her mother play-fighting with pillow. That was so cute.

And, yeah, sexy, there's almost half the scenes with womens or teenagers in swimsuit, in their underwears or in half open dressing gown. ^^

The scene in the bar was well played and fun. The narrative part of Gretchen' mom was faithful to the comic, exactly as I pictured it reading Louder's work.
Also, the character's dialogs were well done, expanding their backstory or relation to each others.

The faces as for them were very well done, with distinct face features being shown between the kid, tween, teens and adults, with some being really cute, a long way from weird looking 3D faces one can find everywhere.

The only (little) default I found was how the animated regression, like a few of your previous instances, suffered from arms jolting around and covering the AR process being shown. ^^'

But that really because I tried to find a - in there.

Honestly a total 10/10.
 
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