Are you ever going to do a strip on AR waters by ShalomMasters? It's a pretty good story.

Noliwankenobi wrote:
Are you ever going to do a strip on AR waters by ShalomMasters? It's a pretty good story.

I hadn't planned to.

I just wanted to let you know how much I admired
your work on Pooside Pure genius Everything works
extremely well I particularly liked the braces and the
regression of language such as the constant giggling
and the use of such words as gosh instead of swearing
The look on her face indicate an extreme crush is developing
which better explains some of the developments in part 2
I also like the way you made subtle changes in the story
to make it more visual such as the extended us of Bobby to more the story
forward rather that just having him describe what he is seeing Nice work

I look forward to seeing part 2 in a few weeks and am fascinated to see how you handle
such a complex story

The _link_ for the Continuous story is not working for me Do you have any suggestions?

By the way I am one of the real old timers going back to 1997 I still remember the site going down for several days because H had to go to the server to fix it and the site was down for a few days until he could get access It took me a half hour to download some of the pictures

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areg5 wrote:
Oni wrote:
areg5 wrote:
Oni wrote:
Awesome. Thank you. Have yet to read it. Will comment later.

BTW: You stated... "I even had the privilege to work with him (Louder) in the past. We did the first Continuous Story, listed in the previous archive where we alternated chapters. It’s sadly long lost now,"

Can you describe and/or name that continuous story? I saved a bunch way back when. Ya never know.

That's what it was called. "The Continuous Story." It was so long ago that I forget the plot, but it stretched out for quite a few chapters. It was in the archive before this one.

I was able to find this in the Wayback machine:

https://web.archive.org/web/20030228051327/http://www.ararchive.com/modules.php?name=Search&author=&topic=&min=10&query=&type=&category=

I found a copy in my old files. It goes until Part 24. Will that do?

I also have a 'Teacher Knows Best' Five part story, with a conclusion from 1999. Is that what's being spoken of?



Oni, the hoarder of AR.

Really cool! Can you post it?

I can, but I'd rather not post it under my name if possible. Shall I e-mail you the copies? Louder? Or do you both simply want me to post it under my name? PM me with your decisions. I'll check back tomorrow.

You can PM me the TKB final chapter and I can post it so it'll be easier to search for with the rest of the story. ...I guess it will be anyway... Although if it's easier for you just to post it that is fine too.
I don't have a problem with you posting the continuous story. With all the parts it seems like it would be easier and quicker for you just to post it rather than go thru all the extra steps.

It would be best to have it all in one place, by putting it as the following chapter of the already existing story, imo.