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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: -2  
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Yeah, sad it has to end. Well, you already expanded it very nicely. Like Gretchen and her mother play-fighting with pillow. That was so cute.

And, yeah, sexy, there's almost half the scenes with womens or teenagers in swimsuit, in their underwears or in half open dressing gown. ^^

The scene in the bar was well played and fun. The narrative part of Gretchen' mom was faithful to the comic, exactly as I pictured it reading Louder's work.
Also, the character's dialogs were well done, expanding their backstory or relation to each others.

The faces as for them were very well done, with distinct face features being shown between the kid, tween, teens and adults, with some being really cute, a long way from weird looking 3D faces one can find everywhere.

The only (little) default I found was how the animated regression, like a few of your previous instances, suffered from arms jolting around and covering the AR process being shown. ^^'

But that really because I tried to find a - in there.

Honestly a total 10/10.


Now that you mention it, yeah ...lots of swimsuits, underwear and almost open robes! I loved doing the pillow fight scene. Can't believe I didn't do that before. It is very hard to get the kids looking right, I've been working at that for a long time. Think I finally have that down.

As for the animation ...I know what you mean, but with women turning into underage girls I try to be very careful not to let anything show as they get ...well ...underage. I don't want any kiddie porn police coming down on me, if you know what I mean.
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 7  
Indeed.
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 0  
Loved the latest installment, as well as all the rest of your work. But I have to wonder...

*** SPOILERS ***

With Annie now able to restore Devon, and Professor Jones willing to help reverse the events of "Clothes Make the Woman..," now would be a perfectly natural time for Professor Jones to get drenched in the oil. Since fate seems to be conspiring against Devon, y'know? Maybe Gretchen or Katie get her with it in defense against the "evil witch?" Lots of possibilities, depending on how young she might get...

- "Miss" Jones... still a young adult, not quite so competent, able to disguise herself as older and maintain her teacher status, with Annie "helping" her? "Okay, Erin, I think this'll fix them, here goes nothing..."

- Sara Jones... as young or younger than her daughter and Erin, and back in school as a witch with Annie. Maybe the witch from "Missadventures" takes over her position as leading professor?

- A baby, in the crib next to her former husband and Jennie from "House of Dreams?" Who's going to take care of all these kids? (A growing problem with your whole catalog , child care must be a real "growth" industry in this town. )

- Maybe it interacts with her magical defenses, and she's *slowly* losing her powers and faculties, for all of the above?

Just a few ideas, though from your stories thus far, I'm sure you've got far more of your own.
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: -2  
Snark wrote:
Loved the latest installment, as well as all the rest of your work. But I have to wonder...

*** SPOILERS ***

With Annie now able to restore Devon, and Professor Jones willing to help reverse the events of "Clothes Make the Woman..," now would be a perfectly natural time for Professor Jones to get drenched in the oil. Since fate seems to be conspiring against Devon, y'know? Maybe Gretchen or Katie get her with it in defense against the "evil witch?" Lots of possibilities, depending on how young she might get...

- "Miss" Jones... still a young adult, not quite so competent, able to disguise herself as older and maintain her teacher status, with Annie "helping" her? "Okay, Erin, I think this'll fix them, here goes nothing..."

- Sara Jones... as young or younger than her daughter and Erin, and back in school as a witch with Annie. Maybe the witch from "Missadventures" takes over her position as leading professor?

- A baby, in the crib next to her former husband and Jennie from "House of Dreams?" Who's going to take care of all these kids? (A growing problem with your whole catalog , child care must be a real "growth" industry in this town. )

- Maybe it interacts with her magical defenses, and she's *slowly* losing her powers and faculties, for all of the above?

Just a few ideas, though from your stories thus far, I'm sure you've got far more of your own.


Heh heh. It's always good to hear new ideas! These things don't just write themselves, you know!

The thing that really stands out in your suggestions is that I never for a moment considered regressing Sara ...that may be a good twist. She has been thus far more or less Deus ex machina, the solver of all problems. Hmmm ...I'll definitely think about that. As for the witch in Missadventures, she's a gypsy which is sort of different, but I do have a few other witches out there Emily ...Michelle ... Thanks!

Glad you like the story!
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: 4  
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I changed the regressions of Jim and Jack, and took out the part about sunlight activating the oil mainly because I didn't read ahead and I already had Samantha and Jenny regress inside.

Another great installment.

Just a couple of nights ago I decided to re-read chapter 4. And when I did I saw the part about the sunlight activating the oil and Jim and Jack's finding that out by accident. Which I'd forgotten all about that scenario for the oil, but did remember you'd had Samantha and Jenny inside when they last used the oil so I wondered what you had planned for that. As best as I can remember I think I wrote that into the story as a CYA to help explain why the full moon would reverse the spell/potion in the first place. Sun=regress, moon=progress. Of course, like it matters anyway. It's magic, or science, or something, who knows why it works like it does?

I was hoping you'd go ahead and add Sally to Jenny's little regression scene at the pool once I saw you had her there anyway.
I know in the original I had sent her away to college by then, and there was a reason she was gone away to college, but it never really mattered exactly when she left.

Honestly, I can't really recall what all happens in chapter 5. I don't know if I should read ahead or just wait on you to post the next installment.
I can give you a little background with chapter 5 that I do remember though, and it explains why I sent Sally back to college. The reason I sent Sally away in the story was so she wouldn't be around in the end. It really didn't matter when she left necessarily, but I sent her away so that I could leave a door open for a sequel with the way I was finishing the story up. Of course that sequel never came. And there really wasn't any type of _frame_work or idea for it at all other than Sally was to be in a position to be not to be affected by happenings at the end, or implied happenings. And she could be the centerpiece and potential hero in the sequel if I made it. At this point I don't even recall if I pulled the string on what that next phase would be or just dropped a character into the story to just leave it up to the readers imagination as to what might be coming next for the characters.

Maybe that gives you some food for thought to tie up some loose ends in the creative process as you work towards your ending. Or maybe you already have an ending charted out. Either way I'm sure you'll do a great job with it.

Looking forward to it!
 
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Re:*Official Areg5 Deviantart Discussion thread* 4 Years, 7 Months ago Karma: -2  
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areg5 wrote:
I changed the regressions of Jim and Jack, and took out the part about sunlight activating the oil mainly because I didn't read ahead and I already had Samantha and Jenny regress inside.

Another great installment.

Just a couple of nights ago I decided to re-read chapter 4. And when I did I saw the part about the sunlight activating the oil and Jim and Jack's finding that out by accident. Which I'd forgotten all about that scenario for the oil, but did remember you'd had Samantha and Jenny inside when they last used the oil so I wondered what you had planned for that. As best as I can remember I think I wrote that into the story as a CYA to help explain why the full moon would reverse the spell/potion in the first place. Sun=regress, moon=progress. Of course, like it matters anyway. It's magic, or science, or something, who knows why it works like it does?

I was hoping you'd go ahead and add Sally to Jenny's little regression scene at the pool once I saw you had her there anyway.
I know in the original I had sent her away to college by then, and there was a reason she was gone away to college, but it never really mattered exactly when she left.

Honestly, I can't really recall what all happens in chapter 5. I don't know if I should read ahead or just wait on you to post the next installment.
I can give you a little background with chapter 5 that I do remember though, and it explains why I sent Sally back to college. The reason I sent Sally away in the story was so she wouldn't be around in the end. It really didn't matter when she left necessarily, but I sent her away so that I could leave a door open for a sequel with the way I was finishing the story up. Of course that sequel never came. And there really wasn't any type of _frame_work or idea for it at all other than Sally was to be in a position to be not to be affected by happenings at the end, or implied happenings. And she could be the centerpiece and potential hero in the sequel if I made it. At this point I don't even recall if I pulled the string on what that next phase would be or just dropped a character into the story to just leave it up to the readers imagination as to what might be coming next for the characters.

Maybe that gives you some food for thought to tie up some loose ends in the creative process as you work towards your ending. Or maybe you already have an ending charted out. Either way I'm sure you'll do a great job with it.

Looking forward to it!


Thanks! It has been an absolute pleasure doing your story, always one of my favorites. I did wonder on the disappearance of Sally. Makes sense now. I just kept her around because she was so cute I didn't want to see her go.

If you ever want to do a sequel to the story, I would be all over that! Priority one!

I only have 1 regret in doing Poolside, and that's that it's almost over. I don't mind ending some of the stories I do, but ending this one will leave me empty.

Hope you don't mind some of my additions. I wanted to give Ms. Snow a face, and now she has one.
 
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