First the important thing - Areg, this is the greatest ar illustration I have every seen done on the archives and I have been around for 17 years You taken a great story smoothed all a few minor rough edges and added depth to the characters A great story made even better Very hard thing to accomplish


That said -
The father is portrayed in very negative terms Is there any chance that the son is
using his influence to make G become his fantasy? She is a young girl now and having a boy come on like that might have been her greatest fantasy at age 13 He might not be so so innocent as he seems

Now that louder has come out of retirement to make a few posts is there any chance that the loophole he once mentioned could be made do a new part either done by him or areg? I always suspect it would be involving the daughter to cuase even more chaos

Time

Time2 wrote:
First the important thing - Areg, this is the greatest ar illustration I have every seen done on the archives and I have been around for 17 years You taken a great story smoothed all a few minor rough edges and added depth to the characters A great story made even better Very hard thing to accomplish


That said -
The father is portrayed in very negative terms Is there any chance that the son is
using his influence to make G become his fantasy? She is a young girl now and having a boy come on like that might have been her greatest fantasy at age 13 He might not be so so innocent as he seems

Now that louder has come out of retirement to make a few posts is there any chance that the loophole he once mentioned could be made do a new part either done by him or areg? I always suspect it would be involving the daughter to cuase even more chaos

Time

I think you may be perhaps looking into it a bit too hard. Gretchen has surely emotionally regressed to a 13 year old girl, but once she recovered her faculties with the mom revelation she mostly regained her mind. I just think Gretchen is the kind of bookish college girl who feels that she wasted her adolescence and wants a second chance at it; Sally herself is shown to be the polar opposite (to my infinite disappointment). It's not really such a hard stretch to believe, especially on a fetish website about people becoming younger again.

Also the dad's asshole power level is really coming through with the visuals of this adaptation. I honestly kind of found him to be a comedy character in Louder's work with all his various antics.

Louder wrote:
vended,
Oni didn't have the epilogue so I've ordered a USB case and I will try and dig out the old HD(s) from my old desktop and load them in the case and see if I can find it on one of them.
That is assuming the case arrives in time. Otherwise it'll be a couple of weeks before I can get to it again.

So, any such luck?

Time2 wrote:
First the important thing - Areg, this is the greatest ar illustration I have every seen done on the archives and I have been around for 17 years You taken a great story smoothed all a few minor rough edges and added depth to the characters A great story made even better Very hard thing to accomplish


That said -
The father is portrayed in very negative terms Is there any chance that the son is
using his influence to make G become his fantasy? She is a young girl now and having a boy come on like that might have been her greatest fantasy at age 13 He might not be so so innocent as he seems

Now that louder has come out of retirement to make a few posts is there any chance that the loophole he once mentioned could be made do a new part either done by him or areg? I always suspect it would be involving the daughter to cuase even more chaos

Time

Well thank you! I think Bobby is a good kid. He was ready to accept the reality of Gretchen returning to normal. It was her decision to stay as she was.

17 years, eh? I don't remember when I first joined here, but it was within a few years of that.

Presenting Poolside Chapter 3:

http://areg5.deviantart.com/art/Poolside-Chapter-Three-525440291?ga_submit_new=10%253A1428443739

areg5 wrote:
Noliwankenobi wrote:
Are you ever going to do a strip on AR waters by ShalomMasters? It's a pretty good story.

I hadn't planned to.
Oh, that would be cool